Easy Ways to Enliven Your Writing

You’re at the movies and the lights dim. A camera pans a cityscape. This is called a long shot. There’s no action but you get a sense of a location. Next, the camera moves in, focusing on something specific, maybe a particular building in that cityscape. The camera moves in closer still, focusing now on a window in that building. We enter that window to see a young woman pouring a cup of coffee in the kitchen when there’s a knock at the door. A scene is ready to begin. We know the context of her apartment in a cityscape, we know the time of day and the weather (helping create mood or give tone), and we’re eager for the story to start.

In memoir, as in movies, narrative supplies the long shot, the wide-angle view. It tells us the way it was on a regular basis, it moves time along (two years can pass in a sentence), it gives background that scenes don’t supply. Narrative gives detail by telling. Scenes are the close up, the one time, one day. They move the story with more detail, by showing.

In Memoir You Want to Show AND Tell

Scene and narrative work together to tell a good story. This interweaving is partly why we get engrossed in memoirs when we read them. There’s an invisible rhythm like in real life: overview (long shot)-event (close up)-overview (long shot)-event (close up).

One difference between showing and telling is the difference between your characters coming on stage to act out their roles and a narrator telling about what the characters said and did. Using both makes all the difference in dramatizing what happened in real life.

New memoirists tend to write in narrative only. It’s familiar. We write letters or long emails in narrative. We converse in narrative. We explain, describe, recount what’s happened, we don’t write scene to re-create moments that add dimension by showing characters in action. When you write memoir, strive to bring “what happened” to life with scene AND narrative so readers can “be there” up close as they follow your story.

What You Can Do: 3 Tips

This week, read a recent piece you’ve written all the way through—a short memoir or a chapter from a book you’re writing. Read it on your computer or print it out to read it with a pen in hand.

1. Notice where you can add short scenes to enliven the narrative and help bring a reader “in”. Remember, even single lines of dialog can animate.

2. Look for places you can add details to make the narrative more vivid and where you can change generalities into specifics. Use a light touch with this; don’t overload with details. But remember, we live in a world of specifics. We don’t just see flowers, we see daffodils and daisies. We see a brooding January sky, not just a winter day.

3. See where you can include a sense of location, not just the names of places (“New York” or “my street”), but a few of the essential details that take a reader there.

Take it slow. Use that smaller paintbrush to add dimension to the broad strokes of color as you write.

About Suzanne

Suzanne Sherman is a veteran publishing professional, with thirty-five years in the field and a specialization in memoir and other nonfiction. Her clients have published with Wiley & Sons, Chronicle Books, Ten Speed Press, and a number of smaller publishers. She has also helped many authors successfully self-publish. Some of Suzanne’s memoir students and coaching clients prefer to write for personal pleasure or to create books for family, and they call her an invaluable guide.

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